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The Ghosts Three

The Ghosts Three

Chapter 41

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About 15 minutes passed and investigator Jordan drove into the driveway and the crime team van was a few minutes behind. He drove up behind the patrol car and got out. Randy walked behind investigator Jordan as he walked toward Ben and Jonathan.

“Jonathan, how have you been?” Jordan shook his hand.

“Well, I was doing better until this morning,” Jonathan said.

“Let’s take a look,” Jordan said.

Jonathan walked first toward the barn with Jordan, Ben, and Randy following behind. As they walked around the back of the barn, Jordan took out his rubber gloves and slipped them on. He knelt by the bag and carefully opened up the end of it. As he opened the deteriorating bag he saw a dirty white nightgown and a small skull.

“This looks like a small child,” investigator Jordan glanced inside the bag.

“Is that a nightgown?” Jonathan asked.

“I think so, or a dress,” Jordan stood up.

Jonathan shook his head and turned around. He walked back around to the front of the barn. He knew that he saw this little girl in his dream. Jordan and Ben walked around to the front of the barn and looked at Jonathan.

“What’s wrong Jonathan?” Jordan asked.

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